Revising My 2nd Draft!

This week I’ve been rocking out my 2nd draft and I’m pretty excited about it. For 2nd drafts, I don’t necessarily look at sentence structure, grammar, or spelling (my fast drafting critique buddies are graciously putting up with these errors right now!).

Instead, I’m dealing with plot structure, character motivation, tightening and bridging gaps in the story.



Here’s my breakdown:


1. Big picture- I pull out my giant chart and glance over how the story moves and flows. Are there any scenes missing? Did I bring all the key points and clues into the story? When I look at the structure, I ask myself if the scenes are in the right order to give the story a solid ending.


2. The 50 Page Dash- You might have heard this term before and I think it’s a great one. In these pages, I like to make sure I’m drawing my readers in, introducing the main problem for the story, and making things tough for my main character.


3. Complications- Next I look at my scenes. Do they complicate the story in a way that it drives my character to action and reveals or builds my character? Each scene must push the story forward and raise the stakes.

More great links on plotting and revising:
1. Elana's thoughts on QueryTracker
2. Sarah has some great ideas at If You Give a Girl a Pen
3. Gale Carson Levine talks about Plot Luck
4. Tons of great stuff on revision over at Kidlit.com


What you do when you work on your 2nd draft? I'd love to hear your ideas!

Kkultarae- Traditional Court Cake

After our SCBWI author dinner, a couple of us decided to take a stroll through Insadong. We spotted these guys making kkultarae and reciting the process in Japanese! We asked them if they could recite it in English.

"Of course!" they said.

These guys were quite the showman and we laughed so hard at their 'wows!'


Kkultarae is also known as Korean court cake, which is made from stretched honey. To keep the strands from sticking together, they're dipped in cornstarch. Nuts fill the inside for extra flavor. When it's finished, there are 16,000 strands of honey!



Here's a video of how they make this sweet traditional cake that used to be researved for the king and his court. (Okay so I'm new to Movie Maker)



And here's me tasting it:



WOW!

What's an unusal treat that you really love? And you can't say Twizzlers because then I'll start craving them again.

Very Cool Contest

Sarah with a Chance is having an awesome contest with great giveaways such as agent critiques and Twizzlers. I know you might be interested in the agent critiques but I'm really all about the

Twizzlers!

It's been MONTHS since I've had one. Like 8 months! I need to stop thinking about them or I'll dream them, write about them, obsess over them....

Contest Winners and Cool Links

Congratulations to the seven winners of the Shopping in Korea Contest!!!!!

Here they are:
Silk Bag- Karen Gowen
Bookmark- Jennifer Hammons
Mini Notebook- Julie Dao
Purse- Carol
Necklace- Naomi Thomspon
Coasters- PJ Hoover
Chopsticks- Victoria Dixon
Magnets- Rebecca Thompson

Email me your address and I’ll ship your prize to you. Remember that it will take about 2 weeks with airmail.


There’s been lots going on in the blogsphere and I wanted to point out some other great stuff. Check these blogs out!


1. Lisa and Laura chat about Ms. Booksniper Outs Herself
2. Beth talks about the online presence of an author.
3. Dear Editor is having a fantastic kick-off contest offering a full book critique. WOW 
4. Jill Corcoran blogs about the formula for the query.
5. Need help Connecting Your Characters? Check out my blog post over at MiG Writers.
6. Bish takes on the A-Z Challenge. (very brave if you ask me!)
7. Researching agents? Check out Casey at Literary Rambles.

Need some fun? Check out the game that went along with my Highlights article, Shoot with Power.

A Tour of Insadong (as promised!)

So last Friday night, while I was at the author dinner (see here), I took lots of pictures for you all of Insadong. Yes, I was thinking of YOU!

Insadong is my favorite place to shop in Seoul. If you come to Seoul, go there! If you're taking the subway, take line 3 to Anguk Station, walk to the corner and take a left. And you're there.

In 1988, the Korean government decided that this district would retain its cultural idea of a Korean marketplace. Really, it's one main cobblestone street with tiny offshoots along the way. On Saturday, Sundays and holidays, all cars are restricted from this street, which gives it a festive feel.

You'll find traditional painting as well as the rice paper and brushes to do it yourself, celadon pottery, wooden boxes as well as all of the things in my shopping contest.

Everytime I go, I always find something new that I like and MUST buy. There are delicious restaurants as well as tea houses. This is a picture of a man selling boiled chesnuts. And the traditional candy is made right in front of you so its fresh and sweet (I'm going to do a post on that soon!).

So now do you see why I adore Insadong? How about you? Do you have any places that you really like to shop at?

Q & A with Emily Gravett

This past weekend, our SCBWI chapter here in Korea had an author dinner with award winning, British author and illustrator, Emily Gravett. What an amazing experience!

The author dinner was located at O SeGyeHyang restaurant in Insadong (yes, I promise to post pics soon!) down this tiny offshoot of the main road. Isn't it the most adorable restaurant?

At the door, like all traditional Korean restaurants, we took off our shoes and settled on comfy pillows on the floor. I decided to order Shabu-Shabu because it's been so long since I've had it. Plus it's fun to cook your own dinner without all the work.

Emily has written and illustrated the famous British titles Mouse's Big Book of Fears and Wolves. We felt so lucky to have Emily come spend time with us amidst her insane tour schedule. And she was open and ready to answer all of our crazy questions.

Here are a few of them:

Where have you been on your tour? And how did you arrange for it to happen?

Actually, my publisher sent me so they provided with flights, hotel and interpreters. I was just in China and after I leave here, I'm off to Singapore. It's busy, busy, busy though. No shopping or rest. (Poor Emily, we really wanted to take her shopping.)

You are quite the public speaker. How do you keep all those kids in your audience captivated?

I get them to participate. If they are engaged in what I'm saying, they're less likely to be chatting off with their friends. I have them do things like 'Put your hands up if you like this' or 'Put both hands up if you love it'. Kids like to be involved.

When you start a story, do you come up with the illustrations or the writing first?

They come together at the same time really. When I wrote Little Mouse, I found the story as I drew.

How is it different presenting to an Asian audience opposed to your audience back home in the UK?

The kids react differently. If they know the books and they speak English then it's easier to get them involved. Often the Asian kids have a harder time to raise their hands since they have a very lecture style approach in their schools. I find I really have to work at it to get the kids to put their hands up. But once they do, they start catching on.

We've read that you are active in the publication process of your stories. Tell us a little about that.

Once I draw the book, I scan it into Photoshop and take it to the publisher. They'll transfer into InDesign but I like to decide how the book will be laid out and such. I even choose the paper for its gloss, smell, and weight. My books are quite interactive with pop-ups and holes. (Me adding in that the mouse bites are just hilarious!)

To top off the evening, Emily's publisher from Macmillan, Soojin who came from Hong Kong to be Emily’s interpreter (and 'brilliant' as the British say), brought books for all of us. And Emily autographed them! I snagged The Cave Baby and The Rabbit Problem for my two boys.

So if you're looking for lovely picture books, with that witty British humor, you really need to check out Emily's books.

Stay in Shape!

Today I went jogging for the first time since I broke my toe two weeks ago. And let me tell you, it was PAINFUL! It sure didn’t take long for me to get out of shape.


The view is gorgeous from the mountain road that I jog along. If you look at the picture here, which was taken from my apartment, the mountain road I run is to the right of the tall apartments.


So while I was huffing and puffing up the mountain, I was thinking how writing is the same way. Work has been taking over my life the last week and I haven’t spent much time on my revisions. I’m getting out of shape in my writing! Because writing every day keeps my eyes sharp for my silly errors, my creative juices flowing, plus I’m in tune with my characters since I’m spending time with them.


So next week my goal is to spend more time running and writing. If I exercise my muscles and even those ‘writing muscles’, I know I’ll be in better shape and that WIP of mine will be too!


Some things I’m going to do to help me out even if I get busy:


1. Pick one random page from my book and edit only that page.


2. Think of 5 things my main character would like and jot them down in the notebook I carry around.


3. Imagine a funny conversation between two characters in the book. Jot it down.


4. Do a writing prompt: http://www.creativewritingprompts.com/


I’d love to hear how you keep your writing skills sharp even when you’re busy.